Question

同学们，你假期通常做什么呢？今年暑假你有没有做一些特殊的事情呢？假如你是Nelly，请给Mary写一封信介绍一下你的暑假吧！

要求： 1.行文流畅，内容丰富。2.字数不少于80.

Dear Mary,

How is it going? I just finished my summer holiday. _________________ ___

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Yours,

Nelly

 

Answer 1

Dear Mary,

How is it going? I just finished my summer vacation. What did you do on your vacation?

I usually stay at home, do my homework and watch TV in my summer holiday, so this time I decided to do something special. I went to Beijing by myself! You must be very surprised, aren’t you? I stayed there for seven days. I visited Tsinghua University and wathed an opera in the theater, it was great. I also visited some places of great interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Place and so on. But the most interesting thing was that I worked as a volunteer at the traffic time. There were too many cars and people in Beijing, so I helped a traffic police officer with his work every afternoon. I was tired but very happy.

My parents were so worried about me that I had to came back home, but I still want to do something useful next holiday, would you like to join me? Write soon.

Yours,

Nelly

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较笼统，我们要做的就是用学过的的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，想清楚要点，并能正确表达出来。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: stay at home呆在家里；do my homework and watch TV做作业和看电视；so I helped a traffic police officer with his work every afternoon.所以我明天帮助警察工作等。,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。