Question

【题目】书面表达

所有的生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。假如你是学生John,请你以Protect Environment（环境） and Love animals 为题写一篇演讲稿，在学校举办的“第六届年度英语节”活动中作专题演讲比赛。

要求：１. 演讲内容包含所有要点，并作适当发挥。

２.条理清晰、字迹工整。词数100词左右。

存在的问题	1. 人们砍伐(cut down)树木和森林，所以很多动物无处可住。 2. 人们为农场和建筑物让出地方，所以野生动物生存空间越来越少。 3. 猎人为了钱而捕杀动物，很多野生动物死亡。
解决的方法	1. 建更多的保护区。 2. 立法……
你的建议	………(1-2点)

Protect Environment and love animals

Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting the environment and loving animals.

All the living things are the host of the earth. And we share the same home with them. However, our environment is becoming worse and worse.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Protect Environment and love animals

Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to e here to give a report about protecting environment and loving animals.

All the living things are the host of the earth. We share the same home with them.

However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. People cut down trees and forests, so many animals have nowhere to live. And we make more space for farms and buildings, many wild animals lose their living areas. Some hunters hunt animals for money, then many wild animals died because of this.

Now, the government takes actions to protect environment and wild animals. And we also should make laws to protect them.

As students, we should try our best to do something to protect them, such as writing to newspapers or putting something on the Internet to let more people know about it.

If we do something to protect them, we will have a better world. If we don’t do anything, perhaps one day we will leave our home-Earth.

【解析】这篇短文要求我们根据提示写一篇保护环境的演讲。我们要用热情洋溢的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含你个人的观点、现在存在的问题、解决的办法以及其重要性等。我们在写作时要注意：1.要注意人称和时态。 2. 要把提示的内容全部写上。3.要避免句式的单一。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：1. 本文紧扣题目要求，做了一篇保护环境的演讲。本文详细、全面地描述了演讲稿的内容，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。语言铿锵有力、有说服力；其中使用了一些复杂句式和短语，包含状语从句的准确使用为文章增色不少。条件状语从句：If we do something to protect them, we will have a better world. 有形容词的比较级：However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. 学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。