Question

【题目】书面表达

近年来雾霾天气（haze）越来越严重。请就此话题写一篇80词左右的短文。

内容提示：

1.因为雾霾天气，学生的户外活动比以前少了；

2.人们不得不戴面罩（mask）出行, 道路上也发生了更多交通事故；

3.空气污染问题严重，不利于健康；

4.每个人都应该采取措施来保护环境。例如……

注意：

1.短文须包括所有要点，不必逐句翻译，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2.第4个要点的内容须适当发挥；

3.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

These years the haze weather appears more and more often. ________________________

Answer 1

【答案】These years the haze weather appears more and more often. Because of the haze weather, students have fewer outdoor activities than before.

People have to wear masks when they go out. Also, there are more traffic accidents on the road.

Air pollution has become a serious problem. It is bad for our health. Everyone should take action to protect the environment. For example, we can change our life style. We can ride bikes or take buses when we go out. I plan to plant more trees in the future.

【解析】本篇作文叫小作者介绍雾霾天气的严重危害，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Air pollution has become a serious problem. It is bad for our health. Everyone should take action to protect the environment.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。