Question

12．用微笑播撒阳光，用行动践行梦想，用一种无形的精神力量感染着身边的每一个人，为同学们树立了一个个积极向上的榜样--这就是"阳光少年"．请你以"A Sunshine Teenager"为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你身边的"阳光少年"（假如这位"阳光少年"名叫 Li Hua）．
写作要求：
1．参考词汇：friendly，be ready，warm-hearted；outgoing，active，housework，be afraid，share，take an active part in等；
2．词数为80左右（开头已给出，不计入总数）；
3．短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名．
Hello!My name is Xiao Ming．I'm studying in No.1Middle School．There are many sunshine teenagers around us． 
                                                                                      
Yours，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：He gets on well with others他和别人相处得很好．get on/along well with sb．与某人相处融洽，和谐．
高分句型二：He is never afraid of difficulties他从不害怕困难．be afraid of （doing） sth．害怕（做）某事．

解答 A Sunshine Teenager
      Hello!My name is Xiao Ming．I'm studying in No.1Middle School．There are many sunshine teenagers around us．
       Li Hua is one of them．（点明主题）He is honest and kind．He gets on well with others（高分句型一）．He is always ready to help others．He goes to the old people's home to do something for the old．He reads newspapers for them，cleans their rooms and washes their clothes．He is also warmhearted，active and outgoing．He always helps his parents do housework，such as doing the dishes，sweeping the floor and making dinner．He is never afraid of difficulties（高分句型二）．He works very hard and he likes reading．And he takes an active part in all kinds of sports．After school，he plays football with his teammates．And he joins the school clubs，such as the music club，the art club and the chess club．He learns a lot from all his activities．（介绍他的优秀品质）
      Li Hua is the best sunshine teenager in my heart．I should learn from him．（得出结论）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．