Question

19．以My hometown为题写一篇80词左右的文章，包含下列要点并适当发挥，语句通顺．
1 镇江是我的家乡，一个古老、美丽且现代化的城市．有著名的金山、焦山和北固山，还有购物中心、电影院等，镇江也因美食而闻名．镇江人勤劳、友好，邻居之间很友好、互相帮助．
2 我住在镇江市中心的一所公寓里．在火车站的西面，离车站500米远，你很容易找到．
3 我认为…

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I think Zhenjiang is a good place to visit，我认为镇江是一个游览的好地方．句子中to visit作定语修饰place．
②I hope you will visit my hometown soon．我希望你能很快访问我的家乡．句子中hope后面跟的是一个宾语从句．

解答 My hometown
My hometown is Zhenjiang．（引出话题）It is an old and beautiful city，it is also modern．There are many places of interest such as Jinshan Park，Jiaoshan Park and Beigu Park，they are very famous in China．In the center of the city，there are some shopping malls，cinemas and other tall buildings．Food in Zhenjiang is very delicious．People here are very friendly and hardworking，the neighbours are very kind，they often help each other．（介绍镇江的一些基本情况）
I live in a flat in the center of the city．It is the west of the railway station，it is about 500 meters from there．，you can find it easily．（介绍我的住处）
I think Zhenjiang is a good place to visit（高分句型）．I hope you will visit my hometown soon（高分句型）．（我的想法）

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性．完成提示词时也要符合事实．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．