Question

【题目】书面表达。写作

请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：

二年前你来到新的学校：

没有朋友；

感到孤独；

不愿学习；

……

二年中Brian多次给你写信：

鼓励你多交朋友；

告诉你学好英语的方法；

和你分享快乐；

……

近年来盐城发生很大变化，你邀请他来盐城游玩。

参考词汇：(1)分享快乐 share happiness (2)鼓励某人做某事 encourage sb. to do sth.

要求：(1)词数：90字(2)信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

Dear Brian，

How time flies! We have been friends for two years. I’m writing to thank you for your help!

Two years ago

____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

Hope to see you soon!

Yours,

Zhang Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Brian,

How time flies! We have been friends for two years. I’m writing to thank you for your help!

Two years ago I came to the new school. I had no friends here and often felt lonely. As a result, I didn’t put my heart into my study. I just thought I wouldn’t fit this new environment.

Later I began to write to you. We became good pen pals. You encourage me to make more friends and tell me good ways to study English. So my English study has been improved greatly. With your help and encouragement, I become happier. I begin to accept my new classmates and become friends with them. I would like to share my happiness in my letter.

Now great changes have taken place in Yancheng. Welcome to come to my hometown to visit. I’d like to be your guide.

Hope to see you soon.

Yours,

Zhangmin

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以张明的名义给Brian写一封感谢信。题目中给出了我们信中的具体内容，主要包括三个部分，一是两年前你刚来到学校时的情况；二是两年来和Brian交朋友后，Brian给你的帮助；三是邀请Brian来盐城玩。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，最后分段来写，这样会使短文有层次，结构清晰。写作时需要注意，短文的第一部分需要用一般过去时态，因此要注意每句话的谓语动词的形式。可以适当增加一些内容，使短文更加完整，但要注意增加的内容要符合全文的整体逻辑。多使用好的句型和短语，使文章的表达流畅完整。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求完整的将这封信的内容表达了出来。短文内容完整，结构清晰。首先作者写了自己两年前刚来到这个新学校时的情况，I had no friends here and often felt lonely、As a result, I didn’t put my heart into my study；接下来作者写的是和Brian成为朋友后的情况，You encourage me to make more friends and tell me good ways to study English，这一部分中用到的短语和句型有encourage sb. to do sth.、good ways to…, with one’s help等；最后作者向Brian发出邀请，Now great changes have taken place in Yancheng. Welcome to come to my hometown to visit。全文语言准确，意思连贯。