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【题目】书面表达(共1小题;满分20分)

假如你是Amy,请你给Mr. Smith写一封信,向他请教一些问题,内容包括:

1、你平时疯狂于流行音乐和流行歌手。

2、你经常花很多时间听音乐,花很多钱买CD。

3、由于你不能准时完成作业,父母和老师都不喜欢你,他们要你放弃这个爱好。

4、请他给你一些建议。

要求:语义连贯,条理清楚,包含要点。字数80-100词。书信格式已给出。

Dear sir,

【答案】

Dear sir,

How are you! I’m worried about my problems these days.I’m crazy about pop music and pop singers.I often spend a lot of time in listening to music and it often takes me a lot of money to buy new CDS.I can’t finish my homework on time.I’m not doing well in my study.My parents and teachers are not pleased with me, so they ask me to give up my hobby.I don’t know what to do.Could you give me some advice? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!

Yours,

Amy

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇材料作文。所给材料内容比较详细,层次清楚,我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题,深入挖掘题材内涵,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题,同时注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上多用简单句,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。同时,文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语,如:be worried/crazy aboutspend time in doingit takes sb some time/money to do sthon timedo well inbe pleased with sbask sb to do sth、give up、look forward to等,这为文章增色不少。

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It 1(get) dark. Paul looked out of the window and signed (叹气). Dad said he could come home by 5:30, but it was almost 7:00. Even if Dad came back, it wouldn’t be much fun playing baseball in the dark. Paul walked into his room and2(throw) his baseball into the corner. He tried to do some homework, but couldn’t.

Paul couldn’t understand why Dad was so busy. He threw himself into the sofa and soon fell asleep. His book 3 (open) to the first page.

The next day at school, Paul didn’t hand in his homework and failed a test. Mrs. Green, his teacher, asked him to stay after school. “This isn’t like you. What’s wrong?”

Paul just sat there quietly. “Paul, if you don’t want to talk, I will. I know that something wrong with you, but you have to get it out. You need to tell someone.”

As Paul walked home, he thought of what Mrs. Green said. When Paul got home, he called his dad. But there was no answer. Then it went to voicemail (语音信箱). Paul began talking: “Dad, I can’t play with you next weekend. I 4(get) lots of problems with my homework. Also, I really don’t want to spend another day looking out of the window and waiting. Whenever you break our plans, Dad, it

5(hurt) me. It’s not too late to rebuild our relationship, but we have to start small. I call you to ask you to help me with my homework sometime. Dad, I love you.”

As Paul ended the call, he felt much relaxed. He didn’t know whether his dad 6 (be) different, but it didn’t matter. He himself changed . He expressed his feelings to the right person. He had a clear head as he did his homework that evening.

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