Question

作文。（15分）

根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文： 李明是一名学生，学习认真，成绩优异并乐于助人，他最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色代表宁静，当他生气或激动的时候，蓝色常能让他平静下来，他喜爱宁静、和平，希望世界上没有战争，永远和平。

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Answer 1

Li Ming is a model student. He’s clever and he’s helpful, too. He often helps teachers and young students at school. He is good at Chinese, Math, English, music and so on. He has a lot of hobbies. He likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. He likes summer because he can swim in the summer holiday. His favorite color is blue. When he gets angry and excited, the blue make him calm down . he likes peace. He hopes that there is no war in the world.

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是介绍Li Ming。所以本文的人称应该是第三人称，在完成句子是应特别注意动词的单三形式，如has 、is、lives、likes等。在写作时，要尽量利用上所给的提示内容，表达时应使句型顺畅并符合英语的习惯表达方法。注意连词的运用，尽量少用排比句，因为英语最忌讳重复。

【亮点说明】介绍了Li Ming的爱好，性格以及所喜欢的颜色。内容丰富，语言表述准确流畅。经典句型结构运用到位。

考点：提纲式作文