题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
在生活中哪些事情会影响你的情绪呢?它们是为何影响你的情绪的?请以What Can Affect My Feelings?为题,结合自己的实际情况,谈谈你的看法。80词左右。
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【答案】
I am upset when I fail my exam. When I know I did badly in my exam, I usually felt very upset and sad. But I didn't give up, I began to make study plans and always insisted on it, then I made some progress. I am angry if people trouble me when I'm busy studying. I feel annoyed. I usually tell them I'm working and I'll talk to them later. They are pleased with what I did..
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇命题作文,谈论生活中影响你情绪的一些事情,并发表自己的一些观点。动笔前要先认真阅读要点,把握写作的大致方向,需要用到哪些词组,运用何种时态,做到心中有数。然后围绕要点适当发挥,同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。
写作亮点:本文语言丰富,结构严谨。复合句的运用:I am angry if people trouble me when I'm busy studying. They are pleased with what I did.可看出小作者的写作基本功非常扎实。