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【题目】（江苏省连云港市岗埠中学2015-2016学年度九年级）张涛是一名九年级学生，面对繁重的学业和升学压力，他总是感到焦虑不安，晚上还经常失眠。请根据你所学的知识，针对他的问题，运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。

要求：1. 书写工整，语言连贯；

2. 词数：80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

Dear Zhang Tao,

I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.

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If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.

Yours,

John

Answer 1

【答案】I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.

Firstly, if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. The two colours can make you feel calm and peaceful. You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic.

Secondly, you may paint your bedroom blue if you can’t sleep well at night. Sleeping in a blue room is good for your mind and body, because blue can create a feeling of harmony.

Finally, perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study for exams, because yellow can make you wise.

If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.

Yours,

John

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如feel stressed，advise sb. to do，make sb. do，at night，in a blue room，be good for，study for exams，make a phone call等。而if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. / You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic./ perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study等多种从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅。同时，Firstly、Secondly、Finally等词使文章的层次清晰、叙述自然，是本文的亮点所在。