Question

【题目】你班Carl同学最近遇到了一些问题，希望得到一些建议和帮助。请你以Mr. Friend的身份给Car写封信，针对Carl的所有问题提出一些有益的建议。

Carl的问题	将来想当一名记者，但很安静，不喜欢与人交谈
	喜欢穿红色衣服，但同学嘲笑他像个女生
	喜欢篮球，并且经常打，作业花的时间较少，不知如何平衡自己 的学业和爱好
你的建议	……(至少四条)

要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息；

2. 不得遗漏提示信息，条理清楚，字迹工整，语意连贯可适当发挥；

3. 词数：110词左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。

Dear Carl,

Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. _______________________

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I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.

Best wishes,

Mr. Friend

Answer 1

【答案】【参考范文】

Dear Carl,

Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. You want to be a reporter in the future, but you are too quiet and you don’t enjoy talking with others. You like wearing red clothes but your classmates think you are like a girl and often laugh at you. You are a student, so you are busy every day. You must have lots of homework, but you are crazy about basketball. You spend a lot of time playing basketball. Like this, you will find you are tired. You should give it up. You don’t stay up late. If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed. You should talk about this to your parents or your best friends. They can help you. Please work hard to get good marks. I believe you will go to high school. I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.

Best wishes.

Mr. Friend

【解析】【亮点说明】

本文结构紧凑、语言简练、层次清晰、内容饱满。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank for doing，want to do，be a reporter, in the future，enjoy doing ,talk with，like doing，laugh at，lots of，spend some time doing sth.，a lot of，play basketball，give up，stay up late，talk about, work hard, go to high school等。而You want to be a reporter in the future, but you are too quiet and you don’t enjoy talking with others./ You are a student, so you are busy every day./ If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed./ I believe you will go to high school.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。