Question

5．时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的，那么怎样才能更好地利用时间呢？请用英语写一篇题目为"How to Save Time"的短文．
内容包括：1、时间的意义和重要性；2、人们浪费时间的现象（至少3种）；
3、节省时间的方法（至少3个）；4、号召大家节约时间．
注意：1．词数80-100；
2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3．文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
How to Save Time
                                

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：They spend much time playing computer games，drinking，sleeping late in the morning and so on他们花很多时间玩电脑游戏，喝酒，睡懒觉等．spend some time （in） doing sth．花时间做某事；and so on等等．
高分句型二：It's necessary for us to save our valuable time我们有必要节省宝贵的时间．这里it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式．

解答 How to Save Time
We have ever heard of"Time is money．Time is life．"
Time is very important to everyone．（时间的意义和重要性）But we can see people waste their time everywhere．They spend much time playing computer games，drinking，sleeping late in the morning and so on．（高分句型一）（人们浪费时间的现象）
It's necessary for us to save our valuable time．（高分句型二）We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class．We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time．We should spend more time reading instead of playing games．（节省时间的方法）
If we can make good use of time，we are sure to get more．Saving time is to save life．Let's save time from now on．（号召大家节约时间）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．