Question

【题目】书面表达。(15分)

上周六天气晴朗，你们去阳光农场Sunshine Farm旅行。上午体验了喂鸡，挤牛奶，骑马；下午采摘了新鲜的蔬菜和草莓，与农场主聊天；晚上大家聚餐。请以Our School Trip为题写一篇日记，记录当天的活动。

要求：1. 书面整洁；要点齐全，可适当发挥；层次清楚，语句通顺。

2. 词数：不少于60词。文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在班级等信息。

Our School Trip

It was sunny last Saturday. ________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last Saturday, my classmates and I had an exciting trip to the Sunshine Farm. We met at the school gate at 7:30 in the morning. Then we took the bus there. In the morning we fed the chickens.The chickens were really lovely. We also rode a horse there, it was exciting. Some of us milked a cow,too. In the afternoon we pick up fresh vegetables and strawberries. We also chatted with the farm happily. In the evening we had a big dinner together. Then we went home. We felt tired but happy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇日记作文。主要描写上周六，去阳光农场一天的活动情况。要认真审题，要有时间，人物，地点，以及活动内容。 last Saturday就确定了作文的时态要用一般过去时，最后一定要写出活动感受。

写作亮点：这篇作文写得不错，围绕提示的三个时间方面展开写作，内容全面，而且有适当发挥。作文中运用了不少短语，an exciting trip to ， rode a horse，milked a cow， fed the chickens，连词but, also ,then 等等，为作文增添了色彩。