题目内容
14.近期,电视剧《虎妈猫爸》的播出引起了大家对"什么才是好父母"这个话题的热议.剧中"虎妈"对孩子严厉而"猫爸"对孩子宽松,请根据表格中的要点提示,写一篇题为"What are Good Parents"的英语短文.| 好父母的品质 | 良师益友,严重有爱、尊重、倾听、耐心、鼓励… |
| 学习榜样,勤奋、负责、诚信、乐于助人、热心公益… | |
| 你父母是如何对待你的(至少2点) … | |
1.词数90左右.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.内容必须包括表中的所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3.短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息. What are Good Parents
Recently,there is a heated discussion about what good parents are and here are some qualities that good parents should have.
In my opinion,the good parents should be the good teacher as well as the good friends of the child.There should be love,patience,listening and encouragement between the parents and children.They should also be the example of the children to follow.So the good parents should be diligent,responsible,honest and willing to help others.
As far as I'm concerned,my parents are good examples of mine,I can learn a lot from them.But they treat me too strict.I don't have the time that really belongs to me.I hope there will be some changes in my parents..
分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是以"What are Good Parents"为题说说好父母的品质,以及你父母是如何对待你的,时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一,三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.好父母的品质:①良师益友,有爱、尊重、倾听、耐心、鼓励②学习榜样,勤奋、负责、诚信、乐于助人、热心公益
2.你父母是如何对待你的(至少两点)
常用到的重点短语:
between…and…:两者之间
As far as sb+be concerned:就某人而言
learn from:向…学习
belong to sb:属于某人
【高分句型】
1.As far as I'm concerned,my parents are good examples of mine.
As far as sb+be concerned:就某人而言
2.I don't have the time that really belongs to me.
①that作为关系词的定语从句,修饰前面的the time,that作为从句的主语.
②belong to sb:属于某人
3.I hope there will be some changes in my parents.
hope后接省略了that的宾语从句.
解答 What are Good Parents
Recently,there is a heated discussion about what good parents are and here are some qualities that good parents should have.
In my opinion,the good parents should be the good teacher as well as the good friends of the child.There should be love,patience,listening and encouragement between the parents and children.They should also be the example of the children to follow.So the good parents should be diligent,responsible,honest and willing to help others.(好父母的品质)
As far as I'm concerned,my parents are good examples of mine,【高分句型】I can learn a lot from them.But they treat me too strict.I don't have the time that really belongs to me.【高分句型】I hope there will be some changes in my parents.(你父母是如何对待你的)【高分句型】
点评 这篇短文涵盖了图画包含的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑.在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句,文章脉络清晰、自然流畅.同时,使用了一些常用的句式和短语,这为文章增色不少.在学习中注意积累,背诵一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
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