Question

书面表达（共1小题，计15分）

请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。 标题为：My Teacher Mr. Moore

There's a teacher Mr. Moore,

Who is lovely and thirty-four.

Always encouraging us to try,

He leads us to a world of "why”.

We all love him more and more.

注意：

1．不得照抄短诗原文。

2．必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。

3．必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。

4．短文不能写成诗歌形式。

5．词数：80左右。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Teacher Mr. Moore

Of all my teachers, I like Mr. Moore most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.

Mr. Moore has his own way to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.

He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇文章要求我们按照标题为：My Teacher Mr. Moore的诗歌写一篇作文，作文结合诗歌的内容，突出诗歌的主题，以短文形式写出来，可适当发挥。

【亮点说明】这篇短文大量运用形容词比较级，最高级。Of all my teachers, I like Mr. Moore most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school..巧妙运用词组not only ，but also，instead of.定语从句的巧妙运用He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.。这些语法的运用是文章活灵活现。