Question

5．在竞争激烈的当今社会，作为一名中学生，承受着来自生活和学习等多方面的压力．请你以 How to Reduce the Pressure为题，谈一谈你是怎样减缓压力的．
要求：1．词数：80词左右．
2．字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰．
3．文章内容可适当发挥．
How to Reduce the Pressure
How to Reduce the Pressure
Nowadays，we are under too much pressure．It's not good for our development．
[高分句型一]（不定式短语作目的状语） In order to reduce the pressure，I often do some sports，such as running，swimming and playing basketball．I also hang out with my friends when I feel stressed．Listen to music is a good way for me to relax，especially light music and pop songs．[高分句型二]（it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语）It's a very helpful to talk with my friends or my parents．They can understand me better．
These ways of relaxing help me a lot．Now I am more confident and do better than before．（最后要总结一下，自己列举的减缓压力的方式方法是不是有帮助）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
In order to reduce the pressure，I often do some sports，such as running，swimming and playing basketball．为了减缓压力，我经常做一些运动，例如跑步，游泳，或者打篮球．In order to reduce the pressure是不定式短语作目的状语，such as意思是"例如"，列举的事物放在起后面．
高分句型二：
It's a very helpful to talk with my friends or my parents．和朋友或父母交流一下，这也是很有帮助的．to talk with my friends or my parents是不定式短语，是真正的主语，而用it作形式主语．

解答 How to Reduce the Pressure
     Nowadays，we are under too much pressure．It's not good for our development．
[高分句型一]（不定式短语作目的状语） In order to reduce the pressure，I often do some sports，such as running，swimming and playing basketball．I also hang out with my friends when I feel stressed．Listen to music is a good way for me to relax，especially light music and pop songs．[高分句型二]（it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语）It's a very helpful to talk with my friends or my parents．They can understand me better．
    These ways of relaxing help me a lot．Now I am more confident and do better than before．（最后要总结一下，自己列举的减缓压力的方式方法是不是有帮助）

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