Question

【题目】书面表达

雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”请以“Everyone Needs Help”为题，写一篇作文。

要求：◆词数：80个左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；

◆书写工整，拼写、语法正确，内容层次分明；

◆全文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。

Everyone Needs Help

In our daily life,_____________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone Needs Help

In our daily life, we will meet different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. I got much help from my parents, my friends, my teachers, my classmates and so on, even some strangers. For example, my parents often help me wash clothes, my teachers often give me help in learning. At the same time, I also help others. I help my parents put away our clothes, I lend something to my classmates. It’s happy to help others. We should help each other. I tell you a story.

One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily. Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm-hearted person.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍三方面的内容，第一方面，自己是否接受过其他人的帮助，第二方面，自己是否帮助过需要帮助的人，第三方面讲述自己或他人的一个这方面的故事。该方面用过去时态。

亮点说明：这篇短文层次分明，行文流畅。不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如no matter at home，n school，or at some other places，For example，at the same time，then，but she was too short to help him to stand，over and over等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。