你准备写一份倡议书.鼓励同学们积极参与光盘行动 (clear your plate)．要求:1．内容主要包括三个方面．现在我们部分同学的不良习惯1．买很多零食,2．不饿时也吃很多零食,3．不喜欢吃的.吃不掉的就扔掉．害处1．浪费了很多事物,2．不利于身体健康．你的倡议1．吃饭时.不点过量的食物,2．尽量光盘 .吃� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．你准备写一份倡议书，鼓励同学们积极参与"光盘行动"（clear your plate）．
要求：
1．内容主要包括三个方面．

现在我们部分同学的不良习惯	1．买很多零食； 2．不饿时也吃很多零食； 3．不喜欢吃的，吃不掉的就扔掉．
害处	1．浪费了很多事物； 2．不利于身体健康．
你的倡议	1．吃饭时，不点过量的食物； 2．尽量"光盘"，吃不掉的打包带回家； 3．不吃或少吃零食； 4．其他倡议…（不少于两点）

2．字数110个单词左右．文章的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息．
Dear friends，
Please join in"Clear your plate"campaign．
Now，some of us students like buying a lot of snacks． They eat a lot even if they were not hungry．If they don't like the food，or they can't eat up the food，they will throw it away．
It is really a bad thing．We have wasted lot of food．And at the same time，it is bad for the students'health．
So boys and girls，let's change our habit．When we have dinners in restaurants，don't order too much food．And try to eat up all the food we ordered．If we can't eat up all o f them，just pack them and bring them back home to eat．Please give up the snacks between meals．Encourage your classmates and parents to join us．If you find somebody is throwing away food，just stop them．
Come on，dear friends．Let's start from ourselves．

分析这是一篇图表作文．内容是写一份倡议书，鼓励同学们积极参与"光盘行动"．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．现在我们部分同学的不良习惯；买很多零食；不饿时也吃很多零食；不喜欢吃的，吃不掉的就扔掉．
2．害处；浪费了很多事物；不利于身体健康．
3．你的倡议；吃饭时，不点过量的食物；尽量"光盘"，吃不掉的打包带回家；不吃或少吃零食；其他倡议…（不少于两点）
常用到的重点短语：
even if 即使
eat up 吃光
be bad for 对…不利
throw away 扔掉
give up 放弃
encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人去做某事

【高分句型】
1．They eat a lot even if they were not hungry．
even if即使，引导的让步状语从句．
2．When we have dinners in restaurants，don't order too much food．
when引导的时间状语从句．
3．①If we can't②eat up all of them，just pack them and ③bring them back home to eat．
①if引导的条件状语从句．
②eat up 吃光
③bring back 带回去．动词不定式to eat 作为目的状语．

解答 Dear friends，
Please join in"Clear your plate"campaign．
Now，some of us students like buying a lot of snacks．They eat a lot even if they were not hungry．【高分句型】If they don't like the food，or they can't eat up the food，they will throw it away．（现在我们部分同学的不良习惯）
It is really a bad thing．We have wasted lot of food．And at the same time，it is bad for the students'health．（害处）
So boys and girls，let's change our habit．When we have dinners in restaurants，don't order too much food．【高分句型】And try to eat up all the food we ordered．If we can't eat up all of them，just pack them and bring them back home to eat．【高分句型】Please give up the snacks between meals．Encourage your classmates and parents to join us．If you find somebody is throwing away food，just stop them．（你的倡议）
Come on，dear friends．Let's start with ourselves．

点评考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．