题目内容
4.爱是心中的太阳,融化你我身边的冰雪.假设你是李明,你们学校的"English Canden"正在办主题为"付出既是收获"的征文活动,请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿.要求:1、文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息.
2、80-100词.标题和文章开头已给出,不计入总词数.
分析 高分句型一:
I often visit the children's hospital to cheer the sick kids up.我经常到儿童医院去鼓励生病的孩子们高兴起来.
动词不定式作目的状语,cheer sb up使某人高兴起来.
高分句型二:
I also give money to charities to help people in trouble.我也把钱给慈善机构,帮助有麻烦的人.
to help people 中动词不定式作目的状语;in trouble处于麻烦中的
解答 Giving is Receiving
I'm a student from Green Middle School.My name is LI Ming.I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy.I often help my classmates with their schoolwork.Sometimes I help clean up city parks.I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month.So I'm pretty popular there.I often visit the children's hospital to cheer the sick kids up.【高分句型一】I read stories and sing songs for them.I am good with children.I also give money to charities to help people in trouble.【高分句型二】【自己平时的爱心行为】I think giving is receiving.Helping others is helping ourselves.Do you agree with me?【我的感受】
点评 根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的 句子,划分必要的段落.但要注意句式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合句要搭配运用.
Meimei:(26)B And I want to try something special.
Lin Fen:How about having a taste of western food?
Meimei:That sounds fine.What restaurant shall we go to?
Lin Fen:That sounds fine.What restaurant here-Pizza House. (27)E
Meimei:Fantastic!It can make us relaxed.But I've never been there before.(28)F
Lin Fen:Never mind.I will show you how to do it.
Meimei:That's very nice of you. (29)D
Lin Fen:We can have many other kinds of western food,such as fried chicken,Italian noodles…
Meimei:I love noodles.I often have them at home.
Lin Fen:So do I.But in Pizza House,they're cooked in many different ways.(30)C
Meimei:I can't wait.Let's go.
| A.You're welcome. B.Good idea. C.And they are all delicious. D.By the way,what else can we have besides pizza? E.We can also enjoy the soft music. F.I know only a little about western table manners. |
要求:
1.根据提示内容,选出一种烦恼,并给出建议.
2.逻辑清楚,语句通顺,行文流畅,自由发挥,观点不限,无需标题.
3.文中不能以任何形式出现真实人名、校名和县(市)区名及其它相关信息.
4.词数:100左右
| Problem Survey | |
| Problems | Numbers of students |
| Do badly in lessons. | 6 |
| Don't get on well with classmates. | 5 |
| Feel lonely at school. | 4 |
| Don't have much free time. | 3 |
| Become fat. | 2 |
First,youcouldeatless.Thebodyneedsfoodforenergy,butyou'llbecomefatifyoueatmorethanyourbodyneeds.【高分句型二】Ifyoueatless,thebodycanburnmorecaloriesthanyoueat.Second,domoreexercise.Doingexercisecanalsohelpthebodyburnthecaloriesandmakeyouthinner.Therearemanywaystodoexercise.Forexample,youcouldgotoschoolonfootorbybike.【给出合理的建议】
Don'tworrytoomuch.Ithinkyouwillbecomefitsoon..