题目内容
【题目】写作
请根据提示写一篇题为“My Favourite Film Star”的短文,词数90左右。
1、 我最喜欢的电影明星是Peter,他是一名著名的影星,他不仅年轻而且……
2、 2015年, Peter在一部恐怖片中扮演了一名侦探。这名侦探通过查看现场……并最终抓住了杀人犯。
3、 由于Peter在这部影片中担任了重要角色且演得十分精彩,他荣获了奥斯卡最佳男演员奖(the Oscar for Best Actor)。
4、 由于他的努力…… (用2—3句话展开合理想象)
【答案】
My Favourite Film Star
Peter is my favourite film star . He is very famous . He is not only young but also handsome . He is very popular among fans. In 2015 , Peter played the role of a detective in a horror film . In the film , the detective checked the scene ,asked the neighbours some questions and found the clues. At last he caught the murderer . Because Peter played an important role and played wonderfully , he won an Oscar for Best Actor . He is famous around the world because of his efforts. He also helps many children in poor areas, he is great.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己最喜爱的电影明星。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如In the film , the detective checked the scene ,asked the neighbours some questions and found the clues. At last he caught the murderer . Because Peter played an important role and played wonderfully , he won an Oscar for Best Actor .等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。