题目内容
假设你是Mike,进入初中已经一个学期了,请你根据下表提供的信息给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件,告诉他有关你的初中生活。
注意:1.词数80左右,邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.邮件必须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
3.文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。
What is your school like? | 20个班级; 900多位教师; 很现代; |
How is your school life? | 周一至周五步行上学; |
每周五节英语课 最喜欢的科目是……因为…… | |
吃健康的午餐; 很少吃零食; | |
What do you do in your free time? | 喜欢听音乐; 擅长篮球; |
周末有时打电脑游戏; | |
What is your feeling anout your school life? | ……(自拟一点) |
Dear Tom.
Long time no see ! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I'd like to tell you about my school life.
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Would you like to tell me about your school life?
Yours
Mike
Dear Tom.
Long time no see ! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I'd like to tell you about my school life. My school is very modern. We have 20 classes. And there are over 900 teachers and students.
From Monday to Friday, I walk to school. Every week, I have five English lessons. I like English best because it is interesting. I have healthy lunch and I seldom eat snacks.
In my free time , I enjoy listening to music. I’m good at playing basketball. At weekends, I sometimes play computer games.
I think my school life is very interesting and colorful!
Would you like to tell me about your school life?
Yours
Mike
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文,作文题目已经给出,而且列出了要求。写作文时要仔细审题,每一条都要写到,注意前后句的连接,不要遗漏要点,必要时可适当发挥。本文时态主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】文章主要写初中的生活,要点全部都写出,并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺,更符合要求。文中使用很多短语,让文章更加出彩,如there are,From Monday to Friday,have five English lessons , like English best,In my free time,enjoy listening to music等。在平时的学习中,要注意点滴积累,这样在写作文时才能灵活运用。
考点:提纲作文。