Question

【题目】根据要求完成小作文，词数：30—40词左右。（共5分）

鲁迅是一位伟大的作家。请你用所给提示词及对鲁迅的认识，以“My favorite writer”为题，写一篇不少于30---40词的英文短文。

提示：tall, short hair, wise, known, a fighter with his pen, young people, influence, thought

My favorite writer

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Answer 1

【答案】

My favorite writer

There are many famous writers in the world. And my favorite is Lu Xun. He was a tall man with short hair. He wrote many articles and books in his life. And he was known as a fighter with his pen. Now many young people are still influenced by his thoughts. As a student, I will work hard and become a great writer like him.

【解析】

试题分析：该题目要求以“My favorite writer”为题，写一篇不少于30---40词的英文短文。介绍一下著名作家鲁迅先生以及对鲁迅的认识。题目中给出了一些英语词汇。写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且这些关于介绍人物时所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了鲁迅以及小作者对鲁迅的认识。结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，将相关信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达，这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如And he was known as a fighter with his pen和I will work hard and become a great writer like him.等。