Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

读了以上同学的调查报告，你有何感想？你是否也曾沉迷于电脑游戏？请以“远离电脑游戏”为题写一篇短文。

内容包括：1．中学生玩电脑游戏的负面影响（包括对学习、经济和身体的影响等）。

2．中学生的主要任务是把时间和精力放在学习上，学好各门功课。

3．建议中学生远离电脑游戏，专心学习。

写作要求：1．条理清晰，意思连贯，词句通顺。

2．不能照抄原文，不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。

3．词数80个左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to stay away from playing computer games?

These days computer is very popular among young students besides me. When I feel tired or lonely, I often spend a lot of time playing computer games. Today I read the survey about my classmates. I was surprised to find how the computer games could influence us. I knew why there were so many young people disliked studying hard and how some students became thieves.

Everyone knows playing come spend too much time on computer games, we’ll have no time to do sports. Playing games too mputer can help us feel relaxed. But if we lose ourselves in it, we may have an unhealthy life. For example, if wuch does harm to our eyes. That’s why so many students wear glasses.

As a student, it’s our duty to study. We must try our best to do well in our lessons. To keep healthy, stay away from playing computer games. As long as we work together, we will have a happy school life

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍中学生玩电脑游戏的负面影响（包括对学习、经济和身体的影响等）;中学生的主要任务是把时间和精力放在学习上，学好各门功课;建议中学生远离电脑游戏，专心学习.根据内容可能会用到一般现在时,注意逻辑性和句式的变化。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅介绍人物时注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如spend a lot of time playing computer games，I was surprised to find how the computer games could influence us. But if we lose ourselves in it, we may have an unhealthy life.，When I feel tired or lonely, To keep healthy等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。