Question

13．请以"How to learn English well？"为题，谈谈你的观点和建议．（不少于70词 ）．
How to learn English well？
                                                     

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
It's necessary for us to learn it well．      对我们来说学好它是必要的，这是it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型，对于…来说…是必要的．  
 高分句型二
  It's very good for you if you are interested in English．如果你有兴趣学英语对你来说是很好的．这是if引导的条件状语从句，如果…．

解答 How to learn English well？
English is one of the most important langnages in the world．It's necessary for us to learn it well．【高分句型一，注意it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】How do you 
study？【开头点明主题】Everyone learns English in different ways．The best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills．They are listening，speaking，reading and writing．We should practice them every day．It's very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful．【正文部分详细如何学好英语】
In a word，n othing  is difficult if you put your heart into it．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．