Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题，计20分）

中学生普遍面临着很多烦恼，请用英语描述下面表格中列出的问题，并提出自己的建议。

烦恼1	整天有做不完的作业，经常熬夜学习，无暇顾及个人爱好；
烦恼2	父母太忙，没有时间陪自己；
烦恼3	几乎没有亲密的朋友可以交流，经常感到孤独；
烦恼4	对自己的体重不满意，不知如何改变；
烦恼5	… …
建议	… …

要求：1、条理清楚，语句通顺；

2、100词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it, they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help. xKb 1 .Com

Some other students aren’t happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit, they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food.

【解析】

试题分析：根据所给材料 可知这是提纲类作文，动笔前首先仔细阅读所给材料，确定写作内容。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时叙述。语言的表述符合语法结构，英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

亮点说明：这篇短文包含了所有要点，能围绕内容要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富。应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。层次清晰，语言地道，主题鲜明，内容翔实，格式正确，结构紧凑。使用了一些比较好的字句。比如：too busy to stay with them；don't have any close friends to talk to；To lose weight and keep fit，等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用， 让文章更出彩。