Question

20．在你的学校生活中，你经历过很多次背诵、课堂答问、各种考试和比赛（学科比赛、体育比赛、文艺比赛、演讲比赛、航模比赛…）所有这些当中，你最难忘的是哪一次？为什么？这种经历带给你什么启示？请用英语写一篇文章，向学校英语报投稿．
注意：（1）60词左右；
（2）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息．
An Unforgettable English Speech Contest
During my middle school study，I have taken part in many matches，but I never forget an English speech contest．
When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest，I didn't think much of it．Many excellent students were in our class．Besides me，several students put up their hands to show their interest in the contest．Luckily，the English teacher asked me to take it．I was worried about it very much．I was eager to get it，but I was afraid to fail．With the help of my English teacher and more than a week's hard work，I won the first in our school．
After that I worked harder．I think I can succeed if I try my best to do it．Where there is a will，there is a way．Do you think so？（．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈最难忘的是哪一次经历？为什么？这种经历带给你什么启示？．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1最难忘的是哪一次经历
2为什么
3这种经历带给你什么启示
常用到的重点短语：
take part in 参加
put up 举起
ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
be worried about 担心
be eager to do sth 渴望做某事
with the help of sb 在某人的帮助下

【高分句型】
1．①When the teacher told us②there was an English speech contest，I didn't think much of it．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②told后是省略了that的宾语从句．
2．I think ①I can succeed②if I try my best to do it．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词can，从句用一般现在时．try one's best to do sth 经历做某事．
3．Where there is a will，there is a way．
有志者事竟成，谚语的使用．

解答 An Unforgettable English Speech Contest
During my middle school study，I have taken part in many matches，but I never forget an English speech contest．（最难忘的是一场英语演讲比赛）
When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest，I didn't think much of it．【高分句型】Many excellent students were in our class．Besides me，several students put up their hands to show their interest in the contest．Luckily，the English teacher asked me to take it．I was worried about it very much．I was eager to get it，but I was afraid to fail．With the help of my English teacher and more than a week's hard work，I won the first in our school．（为什么）
After that I worked harder．I think I can succeed if I try my best to do it．【高分句型】Where there is a will，there is a way．【高分句型】Do you think so？（这种经历带给你什么启示）

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性．完成提示词时也要符合事实．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．