Question

【题目】 书面表达（计10分）

结交朋友在校园生活中是必不可少的，学校英语社就该如何交友为话题做了一次讨论。请你根据下面提供的思维导图，写一篇英文倡议书，谈谈如何交友。

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要求：1.包含导图中的所有信息和基本结构，可适当发挥；

2.词数80词左右（不可超150词），开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数；

3.文章中不得出现真实的人名、班名、学校名。

My dear schoolfellows,

As we know,

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Sincerely yours,

Andy

Answer 1

【答案】

How to make friends

When many people are asked who is the most important person for them.Most of the answers are my parents,my children and so on.But don't forget that there is one kind of pepole who doesn't have direct relationship with you ,but they can also share happiness and sorrow with you!It is your friends!

Everyone needs friends,so it is very important to know how to make friends!Fristly ,we should choose the friends.We should make friends with the people who are kind and friendly.Then,we should share our happiness and sadness with our frinends.What's more ,we should try to communicate with them.Be patient and try to discuss with them! A real friend can make a big diffirence in our life , so try your best to keep your friendship go on !

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如Everyone needs friends,so it is very important to know how to make friends! Be patient and try to discuss with them! A real friend can make a big diffirence in our life , so try your best to keep your friendship go on !等等。