Question

【题目】学校英语报社正在开展题为“The Greatest Help”的征文活动。什么人或物给了你最大的帮助?你取得了哪些进步?有什么感想或受到了哪些教育?请写一篇80词左右的英语短文进行投稿,文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。

The Greatest Help

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Answer 1

【答案】The Greatest Help

I have got lots of help, but my father gives me the greatest help of all.

Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me. He always pushes me to study hard and tries to find mistakes in everything I do. Sometimes, I doubt if he is my father. He leads me to read plenty of books. He says, "The more books you read, the better person you will be." He also says that health is the most important thing for everybody. So I am made to do lots of exercise. Anyway, we have left our happiness and laughter everywhere, on the playground, in the swimming pool, on the mountains and so on. When I meet any difficulties, he encourages me and helps me out. He is always there for me.

As I grow older, my thoughts change from misunderstanding to understanding. He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper. I will never forget the greatest help and deepest love from his strictness and exceptions because they make some big difference in my life.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以The Greatest Help为题，介绍一下在你的生活里，什么人或什么事给了你最大的帮助，并说一说你的感受。审题可知，这是一篇话题作文，题目中只给出了题目，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，来组织语言，串联成文，因此写作前，要仔细思考，确定具体的写作内容。然后再确定文章的时态和人称，这篇短文应以一般现在时态或者一般过去时态为主，第三人称来叙述，要注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时，应注意英语句式表达和汉语习惯的不同，不要逐词翻译，而应使用恰当的词汇、短语和句式结构，以简单句结构为基础，穿插使用并列句或者复合句。为提升文章水平，应选用一些较高级的词汇和复杂结构，成为文章的亮点。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯。