Question

【题目】写作
谈谈你对骑自行车与开小汽车两种交通方式的看法及你通常采用的方式。交通工具 vehicles； 能源energy

Answer 1

【答案】例文： There are many kinds of vehicles, such as riding bicycles, driving cars. Which kind of vehicles do youlike? I like riding bicycles. I think riding bicycles is better than driving cars because it saves money and energy. It can stop air pollution. It has low cost. The bicycle can save space. Riding bicycles can make us feel tired, but it let us keep fit. Driving cars saves more time than riding bicycles. But it has high cost. It can make air pollution. It needs more place than the bicycle. What do you think of ?
【解析】掌握技巧：
（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。
（2）确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现
在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住,吸引读者。