Question

【题目】写作
假如你是李明，你读过或听过龟兔赛跑的故事吗？请你写一下，把这个故事介绍给你的外国笔友托尼。
注意：1 句子要通顺、连贯；
2 词数：100左右；
3 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：tortoise龟；have a race举行赛跑；much faster快得多；catch up with sb.赶上某人；win赢；lose输
Dear Tony,
I'll tell you a story.

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
Dear Tony,
I'll tell you a story. One day, a rabbitand a tortoise decided to have a race. They both wanted to reach the end first.The rabbit thought that he could win the race easily because he could run much faster than the tortoise. The race started. The rabbit ran fast at first. The rabbit thought the tortoise could never catch up with him, so he decided tohave a rest under a tree. After the rest, he could not see the tortoise, so he thought that the tortoise could give up running. But to his surprise, the tortoisearrived much earlier than him. The rabbit lost the race. Isn't it interesting?
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】写故事的要点：
1.合理分配情节
2.人物关系的合理设定
3.无论大事小事都要设定好原因和结果
4.情节不要死套，要合理运用，并要符合人物的思想与行为
5.要注意细节部分，不要把该略的留，该祥的去掉
6.要让人物有血有肉，更要让故事给人感觉起来是真实的！
7.内容要创新。就算题材很老土也要想办法使故事变得生动有趣。方法很多，比如在叙述方法上创新一下，或者从新的角度来分析故事，总之就是要有新的突破。