Question

6．根据中文和英文提示，写一段意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信．信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Emily通过邮件想了解使你发生改变的人．请你谈谈她/他是谁，发生了什么令你改变的事，以及你的感悟．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】I have changed a lot since I became a middle schoolstudent．自从我成为一个中学生以后，我改变了很多．since引导时间状语从句，主句用现在完成时
【高分句型二】I could hear my heart beating fast and I could hardly breathe．我能够听见我的心脏跳动得很快而且呼吸困难．hear sb．/sth．doing 听见…正在做某事

解答 Hi!Emily，
    I'm glad to hear from you．
    I have changed a lot since I became a middle school student【高分句型一】．Linda is the person who has changed me．I did not like running．One day we had a relay race in P．E．class．I hesitated about whether to join in the game or not．Linda came to me and told me not to worry．Then I decided to join them．While running，I could hear my heart beating fast and I could hardly breathe【高分句型二】．Just when I wanted to give up，I heard someone cheering on me and found that it was Linda．I regained my strength and kept running to the finishingline．
   With Linda's encouragement and trust，I practiced running every day after school from then on．It is she who makes me believe that I have the ability to challenge myself to do something beyond my reach．
Yours，
Li Hua

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