Question

Writing 9(2012 梅州)

        目前，我国城市化进程的实施给从乡村(镇) 迁人城市的大多数孩子带来诸多问题，特别是在交朋友方面。假如你是 Know,你的朋友Tony发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约80左右。

   内容包括如下：

   1.在小区内玩耍时,你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友，并告知家长；

   2.请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动；

   3.在星期天，可外出郊游等。总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。

要求：1.涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

     2.卷面整洁、书写规范工整。不得逐字翻译。

(可目旨用到的何：First,Second,Third,In conclusion)

Dear Know,

I need some advice on how to make friends!1 have just moved to a new city.I am 13. 1 don't know anybody here and I want to make some friends.What^s the best way? Where can I meet people?

                                                                                                                                Yours,

                                                                                                                                    Tony 

Dear Tony

There are lots of things you can do.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

It takes time and patience (耐心) .I hope you will find a best friend soon!

                                                                                                                                 Yours,

                                                                                                                                     Know

Answer 1

Writing 9

[写作要点]

(1) 审题：本文是一篇文字引导性作文，属于记叙文。主体时态为一般现 在时；

(2) 确定要点：

  ① 主动与他们交流，并告知家长；

  ② 去图书馆或其他公共场所，结i只更多朋友并参加文体活动；

  ③ 星期天外出郊游。

[参考范文]

Dear Tony, 

   There are lots of things you can do.First,you can ride your bike in your neighborhood and try to find some kids.When you find some,you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second,you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some places where there are lots of kids. You can try joining an art class or a sports club.These are all great ways to meet people.Third,you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays. In conclusion,tiy to be active wherever you are,but just be yourself and don't try so hard. It takes time and patience (耐心) .1 hope you will find a best friend soon! 

Yours, 

Know