Question

【题目】（题文）假如你是李华，本周六与好友相约去北京植物园。你的美国网友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。请你向他发出邀请，告诉他去哪儿，做什么以及你的建议。

提示词语：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a picnic

提示问题：When and where are you going this Saturday?

What will you do there?

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What do you advise him to do?

Answer 1

【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a picnic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

【解析】试题分析：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。本题根据提示内容应该用一般现在时，邀请对方并给出建议，需使用表达邀请和用于提建议的相关短语和句式，注意长短搭配，并在行文中增加细节和过渡，使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析提示要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累和写作练习以外，还应该适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a picnic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，come back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.等多种从句和be going to结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。