Question

【题目】根据下面的提示以"Amazing animals"为题写一篇短文。词数在80左右。

1.世界上最大的动物不是大象，是蓝鲸(blue whale) ;

2.世界上最大的动物在海洋里，但不是鱼;

3.它们很久以前就生活在地球上;

3.它们通常有30米长，重1000千克。

4.它们是世界上最聪明的动物之一，它们可以相互交谈。当然，我们是听不懂的。

Amazing animals

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version

Amazing animals

Elephants are not the biggest animals in the world. The world's biggest animals are in the sea-but not fish. They lived on the earth a long time ago. They're usually 30 metres long and 1，000 kilos heavy. They're one of the cleverest animals in the world. They can talk to each other, but people don't know what they are saying. What are they? They're called blue whales.

【解析】本文叙述了世界上最大的动物是蓝鲸，所以句子的主语应该用第三人称，叙述蓝鲸现在的情况用一般现在时，叙述它们过去住在陆地上应该用一般过去时。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：one of the cleverest animals in the world世界上最聪明的动物之一；talk to sb给某人交谈；用了what引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。