Question

【题目】书面表达。

在成长的过程中，每个人都会有烦恼的时候，假如你的好朋友心情不好，你该如何安慰他/她呢？请写出你的建议（80个词左右）。

How to Make Your Friends Feel Better?

It is normal to feel sad sometimes.

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Make Your Friends Feel Better

Many things around you may affect our feelings or moods. It’s normal to feel sad sometimes. What should you do if something bad happens to your friends? Here are some suggestions. First, listen to soft music and sing some lovely songs to relax yourself. Second, don’t keep silent. Talk with you parents, teachers or friends. Tell them about what you think and how you feel. Try to get help from them. Third, remember to eat healthy food and have good sleep. And do some exercise every day. Finally, think it over before making an important decision. In short, it is important for us to be in a good mood.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，假如你的好友心情不好，该如何进行心理安慰。根据信息提示，首先要把握写作的大体方向，可发挥的地方较多，在句式的选择上，应以祈使句为主。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。First, Second, Third, Finally的使用，使文章更具条理性。