Question

书面表达

上个月，你们学校开展了“文明规范月”活动，活动以来发生了很大变化。假如你是班长，请你根据下面表格内容提示，代表同学们进行总结发言，总结你身边同学的不同表现，同时发表自己的看法。

要求：

1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2．必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3．词数不少于90，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

How time flies! Great changes have taken place in our school since we took part in the civilized norms month activity．Now most of us can act better than before．________________

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解析：

One possible version 　　How time flies! Great changes have taken place in our school since we took part in the civilized norms month activity． Now most of us can act better than before．We can get on well with our teachers and classmates．Some of us are so careful that we often help close the windows or the doors or turn off the lights．Some of us are kind enough to help the students in need． 　　Sadly, some of us pay no attention to what they are doing．For example, they care nothing about the environment．Sometimes they throw away rubbish here and there, and make a lot of noise in public．They are too impatient to wait in line．A few of us say bad words or quarrel with others． 　　In my opinion, as a student, we should act in a polite way．I hope we will have more activities like this．So we can learn more from these activities．I'm sure we can live happily if we try our best． 　　书面表达：评分标准： 　　先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。 　　第五档(15－13分)完全符合题目要求，表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯，字数达标，基本或完全没有语言错误。 　　第四档(12－10分)符合题目要求，表达基本清楚，信息较完整，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 　　第三档(9－7分)基本符合题目要求，表达不够清楚，信息不够完整，语言欠通顺，有部分语言错误，影响 整体理解。 　　第二档(6－4分)部分内容符合题目要求，内容不完整，表达不清楚，信息不完整，有较多语言错误，所写 内容难以理解。 　　第一档(3－0分)与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语。