Question

Writing. (作文) (共20分)

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I don’t want to lose________”

(以“我不想失去……”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：

许多初三的学生忙于学习，可能没有时间去留意身边的事物，但在生活中总有某样东西你不想失去，是什么呢？为什么？

Words or phrases for reference（以下单词或短语仅供参考）

precious be helpful to worth care for

（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

We were always busy studying,but I thought we needed time to do something useful to help others.So I had a dream,in my dream,I wolunteered to serve the Beijing Olympics. I tried my best to help the foreign friends from different countries. When I found a foreign friend worried in the street, I went up to him and asked him what was the matter. The foreigner told me he was Jack ,and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel. Then I stopped a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel .I talked with Jack on the way, I made Jack know more about Beijing. Jack thanked me very much , he thought my English was very good.I was very happy.I thought being a volunteer can experience different things,It can give me a chance to help others.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如I tried my best to help the foreign friends from different countries. I went up to him and asked him what was the matter.等，and等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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