题目内容
你班计划举行一次以“My dream job”为话题的英文主题班会课,老师要求每位同学写一篇短文,分享各自的“梦想”,内容包括以下几个方面:
1.你梦想做什么工作;
2.你选择这个工作的理由;
3.你为实现这个梦想要做的准备。
注意:1.内容可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;词数70。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。
My dream job
Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job?
My dream job
Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job?I want to become a pianist because I like playing the piano the piano and I’m good at it.
I know it’s not easy to be a good pianist.So I’m going to work harder.I will keep practicing for at least an hour every day.At the same time,I’ll try to learn more about the outside world.Where there’s a will,there’s a way.I believe I can do it.
【解析】
试题分析:因为这里谈论的是自己的梦想的工作,所以句子一般情况下用的是将来时,当然叙述喜欢这个工作的原因时可以用一般现在时,为了这个工作而叙述自己今后的努力方向时,应该用一般将来时。要注意句子应该用第一人称。
【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式,增加了文章的色彩,如:I want to become a pianist because I like playing the piano the piano and I’m good at it. ,I’ll try to learn more about the outside world等,短文用了连词如because,so等,使句子的结构更加复杂,不再是单一的简单句,用了一个谚语,增加了文章的亮点。
考点:话题作文。