Question

13．Write a short passage at least 60words according to the given information．（根据所给信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）
Last month thousands of dead pigs appeared on the Huang Pu River．People were very upset about the event．What do you think？（上个月黄浦江水域出现大量死猪．人们对此事很焦虑．请你就这个事情谈谈你的看法．）
That the increasing number of dead pigs has been collected fromShanghai'sHuangpuRiversurprised me recently．There's no doubt thateveryone shoulddevelop good habitsto protectthe environment．First of all，we cannot throw litter about/around because it will influence others，and what's worse，mess the ground．Additionally，taking bus to school instead of taking a private car is also a good choice．It's common knowledge thatoil resource is very precious nowadays．There'remanymore things we can do．As a teenager，please try your best to protect our earth，like loving our mother．Believe it or not，our life will be more colorful and meaningful，won't it？．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①There's no doubt that everyone should develop good habits②to protect the environment毫无疑问每个人应该养成好习惯去保护环境．
①There's no doubt that 从句：毫无疑问…
②动词不定式做目的状语．
【高分句型二】
There're many more things we can do．有很多我们能做的事情．
we can do是定语从句，修饰先行词things，关系词that作为从句宾语，故省略．

解答 That the increasing number of dead pigs has been collected from Shanghai's Huangpu River surprised me recently．（状况）There's no doubt that everyone should develop good habits to protect the environment．【高分句型一】（看法）First of all，we cannot throw litter about because it will influence others，and what's worse，mess the ground．Additionally，taking bus to school instead of taking a private car is also a good choice．It's common knowledge that oil resource is very precious nowadays．There're many more things we can do【高分句型二】．As a teenager，please try your best to protect our earth，like loving our mother．
（建议） Believe it or not，our life will be more colorful and meaningful，won't it？

点评 作文出题非常新颖，把着眼点放在了实事上，体现出中考作文不再局限于应试，而是更加关注身边发生的事情．同时，环境也是一个大家比较熟悉的话题，这也是出题人希望学生通过把自己熟悉的话题作文表达使用在身边实事上，做到学以致用的思想．