Question

【题目】书面表达

以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约100词的短文。

要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。

2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。

Answer 1

【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,

“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.

Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.

【解析】这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。