Question

【题目】书面表达。

假设你是 Mary，下面是你的好朋友Tom的相关信息，请仔细阅读后，以“My good friend”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文，在英语课上介绍自己的好朋友。

要求：内容全面，可适当发挥。语法正确，语句通顺，衔接自然，书面整洁。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My good friend

Hello, everyone. I want you to know my best friend. His name is Tom White. He is from America. His birthday is on January 17th and he is 12 years old now. He likes eating vegetables. His favorite vegetables are carrots and potatoes. He studies very hard. He likes English and P.E. best. He helps me with my English. Also, he often plays sports after school. His favorite sport is baseball. We often play it together.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们来介绍一下自己的一个好朋友，题目是My good friend。在题目中给出了我们好朋友的相关信息，如姓名、年龄、最喜爱的蔬菜、科目和运动等。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过审题可知，这篇短文介绍的是Tony的信息，因此全文应该使用一般现在时态，第三人称单数。所以要特别注意每个句子中的谓语动词形式，要用第三人称单数，别忘了加s或es。同学们写作时，还可以根据需要补充一下信息，使文章的内容更为充实、完整。多使用好的句型和词汇，使短文表达流畅、连贯。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，作者详细地给我们介绍了自己的朋友Tony。主要从一下方面进行的介绍，首先是他的姓名和年龄，His name is Tom White. He is from America. His birthday is on January 17th and he is 12 years old now.，这里使用了and连接的并列句；接下来是Tony的一些喜好，He likes eating vegetables. His favorite vegetables are carrots and potatoes. He studies very hard. He likes English and P.E. best. His favorite sport is baseball，这几个句子在表达时，特别需要注意谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。而且favorite 这个词在使用时要注意，前面用形容词性物主代词。作者在这两个方面都没有出现错误。整篇短文表达流畅，内容完整。