Question

【题目】写作

以后你可能会很富有，想一想如果你富有了，你会用你的钱干什么？请展开联想，以 “If I’m rich”为题写一篇短文。（60-80词）

提示词汇：

1. buy a big house, family, a happy and comfortable life;

2. travel all over the world;

3.help the poor children, get an education.

Answer 1

【答案】If I have a lot of money, I’ll buy a big house for my parents. I hope they can live a more comfortable life.

If I have a lot of money, I will plant more trees and flowers in my city. On the one hand, it can make our city more beautiful. On the other hand, it can improve our environment.

If I have a lot of money, I will give some to charities and help those poor children who can’t go to school. I’ll be very happy when I see them studying in bright classrooms.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。要写的材料比较具体：有钱后，第一是旅行，第二为家人做一些事，第三是做慈善。我们要仔细选用词汇和短语，用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，文章主要运用if引导的条件状语从句，并注意一般将来时态的运用，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。