题目内容
书面表达（共1题，计15分）
随着我市创卫工作的不断推进，盐城已成为一个具有现代化气息的城市, 它吸引着许多游客来此旅游、投资、学习。展示盐城人民的精神风貌是每一位盐城人的职责。请以 “To Be Lovely Yanchengnese为题写一篇短文。
要点如下：
社会公德 (如：主动让座、遵守交通规则、助人为乐)
环境保护 (如：保护花草树木、节约能源)
公共礼仪 (如：在公共场所不抽烟、不大声喧哗、不乱扔垃圾)
作为学生，我们应该……（不少于两点）
参考词语：遵守交通规则 obey the traffic rules, 花草树木 plants and trees
注意：不要逐句翻译以上要点，可适当发挥。
词数： 80左右，标点符号不占格。文章开头已给出，不计入词总数。
To Be Lovely Yanchengnese
Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty. We should
Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty.We should obey the traffic rules. We should take care of plants and trees. And we mustn't spit in public or throw everywhere. We shouldn’t smoke or talk loudly in public.
As middle school students, we should respect our teachers and the old. We should also get on well with each other friendly and be polite to other people. Besides, we should be always ready to help each other. Do you agree with us?Let's start from ourselves !
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，所给材料要点清晰，要求明确，话题内容贴近学生学习生活实际，考生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上注意句式的转换。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：we should/shouldn’t/mustn't 、take care of、get on well with each other、 be polite to、be ready to以及连接词and、or、besides等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，背诵一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：话题作文。
