Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Jane, 请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文介绍一下你的家人，50词左右。

要点：(1)家庭成员；(2)年龄；(3)职业；(4)正在做的事情。

There are ________ people in my family. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】There are three people in my family.

They are my father, my mother and I. I'm fourteen years old. I'm a student. I'm doing my homework now. My father is thirtyseven years old. He is a doctor. He is watching TV now. My mother is thirtyseven years old, too. She is a worker. She is doing housework now.

I love my family!

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，介绍一下你的家人。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如there be, fourteen years old, be doing, do my homework, now, too等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。