Question

5．根据提示写一段短文，谈谈上个星期天晚上8点你和你的家人做的事情，80词左右，开头已
写好，不计入总词数．

You	read English
Your father	read Newspaper||
Your mother	make dinner
Your brother	play basketball
Your grandparents	watch TV

Last Sunday，I was very busy，…
                                        

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to improve my English，I spend an hour reading English every day．
句中涉及到短语有"in order to do sth 为了做某事"、"sb spend+时间+doing sth 某人花费多少时间做某事"．这句话意为：为了提高我的英语，我每天花一小时读英语．
高分句型二：
He wants to be a basketball player when he grows up．
句中涉及到的短语有"want to do sth 想做某事""grow up 长大"，这句话意为：当他长大后，他想成为一名篮球运动员．

解答 Last Sunday，I was very busy．I did my homework all the day．At eight o'clock，I was reading English．In order to improve my English，I spend an hour reading English every day．（高分句型一）My father was reading a newspaper while my mother was making dinner．My mother does well in cooking，we all like the food made by her．My brother is very lively，he like playing sports．He wants to be a basketball player when he grows up．（高分句型二）He was playing basketball at that time．What were  my grandparents doing？They were watching TV．【介绍家人在做什么】
Look!How happy we were!I love my family．【总结全文】

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．