Question

【题目】

Jim 过去	1. 功课好，积极参加学校的各项活动。 2. …
Jim 现在	1. 对学习没兴趣，上课不专心。 2. …
你的看法	玩电脑游戏可能使你放松，但……
你的建议	(至少发挥两点)

81. 假如你是李华，你的笔友Jim最近沉溺于玩电脑游戏，为此你很担心。请根据下表提示给Jim 写一封信，谈谈你的看法及建议。

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school.But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don’t listen to the teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, you can’t hand in your homework on time.Perhaps playing computer games can make you fell relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study. And it may do harm to your health. For example, it can hurt your eyes and neck.I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored? As your friend, I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Jim 写一封信，谈谈我的看法及建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I really feel…….，You used to……，you can’t…….，Perhaps playing computer games can…….，it can hurt……，I hope…….，Why not……？等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。