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【题目】文段表达

根据中文和英文提示，用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。所给的提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李华，你的笔友Peter想了解你日常生活中的榜样。请你以“A Role Model in My Daily Life.”为主题，给他写一封邮件，告诉他你日常生活中的榜样是谁，做了哪些令你敬佩的事情，并谈谈你的体会与感受。

提示词语：role model, set, example, help, learn, hope…

To: Peter From: Li Hua Subject: A Role Model in My Daily Life

Hi! Peter, How is it going? I’d like to tell you about my role model in my daily life.________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________Anything new at your school? Yours, Li Hua

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【答案】

To: Peter

From: Li Hua

Subject: A Role Model in My Daily Life

Hi! Peter,

How is it going? I’d like to tell you about my role model in my daily life. My role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. We look on him as our “close friend”.

Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up.

Anything new at your school?

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求以A Role Model in My Daily Life为题写一篇短文。写作时，要用上提示词，明确哪些要点，要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. 准确运用时态，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。