Question

【题目】 假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Peter在来信中询问你和你的同学们在新年里都希望在哪些方面有所提升?为此.你在你们班做了一个调查，调查结果如下。请给Peter回信,简要介绍调查结果，并谈谈你自己的提升计划(至少两个计划)以及你将如何落实,让新的一年过得有意义。

要求:

1.作文要点齐全，书写工整，逻辑严密.句意通顺:

2.注意时态;

3.字数:80-100词;

4.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名及校名。

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear from you. For your questions in the letter, I did some research in our class. Students mainly want to improve in these four aspects in the next year. There are learning, physical, interpersonal and hobbies. Among them, there are many people who want to improve their study and hobbies, because we all think it is most important to study, because we will take entrance examination in another year.

For me, I want to improve my study and interpersonal relationship. Although I’m still learning well, I still make mistakes sometimes, so I want to improve. When I communicate with my parents, I always feel that they don’t understand my ideas, so I will tell my friends anything, but I really want to tell my parents, but I don’t know how I should say it. So I think I can improve on that.

We all hope to make some progress in the next year and live a more meaningful year.

Your

LiMing

【解析】

1. 题干解读：文章主要是以问卷调查的形式展开描述，把图表中要求的四个要提升的方面写清楚具体，分清主次要点，要以自己为例写出想要改善的方面以及原因。