Question

【题目】假如你是李涛,收到远在美国的笔友Peter的电子邮件，请阅读他的电子邮件，给他写一封回信，

帮助他解决烦恼。

要求：1.词数在80～100词之间。

所写内容要积极、向上，能够解决实际问题。

3.字迹工整，语法正确，句型丰富，条理清晰，行文连贯。

ent soon.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am so glad to hear from you. But I’m sorry to hear that you are unhappy.

In your letter, you said you made a mistake and let your winning team lose

the game. You were afraid to your coach might kick you off. In fact, you

don’t be anxious .To begin with, you can talk with your coach and explain

to him that you want to win and you are sorry to make such a mistake.

You’ll work harder and do better than before. Secondly, you can say sorry

to teammates. You can also buy small gifts for them or invite them to have

dinner. I think your coach and your teammates will forgive you. Good luck

to you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Tao

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