题目内容

假如你是Mary 的班主任老师,Mary把她的困惑告诉了你。请根据以下信息,你给Mary提出几点建议。(不少于70词)

 

应该做的事情

1.上课专心听讲,按时完成作业;

2.每周至少参加两次体育活动;

3.友好地和同学们相处;

4.周末好好休息;

5.做一些自己喜欢的事情;

6.可以多读一些好书

不应该做的事情

1.不要和父母吵架;

2.周末不要上太多的课程;

3..不要过多的上网,少打游戏。

希望

平时更好地和父母、老师交流;

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

要求:1.包含所有表格内容,可适当发挥;

2.开头已给出不计入总词数。

Here is my advice

 

【答案】

 

Here is my advice:

The right thing to do

1. Listen attentively in class, finish your homework on time.

2. Take part in the physical activity for at least two times a week;

3. Get on well with your classmates;

4. Have a good rest over the weekend;

5. Do something you like;

6. You can read some good books.

Should not be doing

1. Don't quarrel with your parents;

2. On the weekend, don't take too many courses;

3. Don't spend too much time on the Internet, playing video games.

I think you’d better communicate with parents, teachers at ordinary times;

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,以老师的名义给玛丽写一封信,并就她面临的问题提出几点建议。题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态,关键单词等问题,注意不要遗漏要点,注意文后要适当提出自己的建议。时态一般应该用一般现在时,祈使句和should句型用的较多。由于本文主要是来提出建议,故叙述中可以借助于序数词.

考点:提纲类作文

点评:此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料,不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识,不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够,就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试,可以有选择的背诵一些范文,这样应考时就会有法可依。

 

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I have some problems and I need your help.

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